Saturday, July 24, 2010

Creative Writing

Cross Country Race

Yesterday on the 20th of May I was in the cross country race. I was really nervous that my legs were shaking. When it was time for the race I felt like even more nervous. Mrs Tournquist was the one who told us to go. I was easy to spot because I was wearing a green top and brown coloured shorts and I had my hair in a pony tail.

After the race I felt extremely tired. I came second year six girl. The race was so exhausting that I could not run any more. My Dad was there he said I was one of the best. I did a really good job. I had a great time and I would be happy to do another cross country race. I felt really pleased with myself.

1 comment:

  1. Great writing I loved how you used some adjectives to make you know it's not a report
    Congrations on your achievement



    Madison, a friend of Jade's

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