Saturday, July 24, 2010

Creative Writing

Cross Country Race

Oh no It was cross country. I was scared as well as excited. Everyone said “good luck”. Then I felt a wave of anxiety, about what would happen. I said to myself “I wonder if dad or mum is coming to watch Jasmine and me”. Then I gave a little shiver. This was going to be more interesting than I thought it would be! Hopefully I don’t fall in any puddles! It was 1.30 after lunch… We went to Mr Mossips farm, next to our school sand pit. When we sat down I was shivering so much that I thought I was going to scream so loud! I was scared. I wanted to run off like a shooting star when I started.

I was so pleased of myself, I came first place! I felt so tired so tired that I could fall asleep. My legs were so sore I fell to the ground when I passed the finish line.

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